Waiting for you is like waiting for someone to invent a new color,
it may never come, it may be possible
by the time that moment comes, it will be beautiful
that new color will be my new favorite color
And everyone else will think otherwise
and I want you to be that one to invent that color
because it will be you who'll know my favorite things
but until that time arrives, I will continue to wait.
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DeleteWee :) Nice piece you got there. Keep writing! Also, never stop doing your music.
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing more romantic than a lover waiting for her partner. This is such an emotional way to describe what waiting is like and how it would feel when the time finally comes.
ReplyDeleteGood one... It's really colourful and nice... Keep it up! Don't stop doing what you like!
ReplyDeleteI love this. This kind of reminds me of my husband. I love the way that you phrased the first two sentences.
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I hope you find the one you are waiting for. I'm sure if there's a will, there'll be a new color being created.
ReplyDeleteAre you in love right now? It seems that your so inspired writing this. <)
ReplyDeletehaha. stop it, you're making me blush :"> and no, I'm not in love right now.
DeleteAll the good things in life are worth the wait. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful... Indeed, that person who loves you definitely knows your taste and all things you love.
ReplyDeleteLove it! It's so true and i can imagine it.
ReplyDeleteThis is short but beautifully written. I love how it captures the feeling of anticipation for love to come
ReplyDeleteI was really struck by the metaphor of waiting for a new color to be invented. I would never have thought of that comparison. Very original and on point.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. This could fit in a romantic song. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAs they say, love adds color to life. Great things come to those who patiently wait.
ReplyDeleteInteresting perspectives. I like how you describe that the new colour will be your favourite and it will be beautiful when it is created. Such faith!
ReplyDeleteI wonder if how do you do your poetry. Do you do it with inspiration or just a thought that bumps from time to time in your head? I like your poem here.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...Waiting for your lover patiently is a sign of true love.
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written indeed!
ReplyDeleteWaiting isn't bad. It makes you appreciate things more. :)
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