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| Maris and Lonard's hands when I was the third wheel |
when you hold my hand
Apricity at its finest
rekindling the sparks inside me
The way your rough edges touch my skin
remind me that this is real
and with that I knew
that everything will be okay
Ooooh this is pretty sweet. Thumbs up mate!
ReplyDeleteOmg! Thank you! I wish you didn't comment as Anonymous though. I want to know who you are so we could be friends :)
DeleteHaha that's a nice song playing in the background on the site.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean you're also a banana?
It doesn't really mean anything. Haha. I just want to state how weird I am. XD
Deletethe roughness of life is real. I like how you mentioned that to put things in perspective...
ReplyDeleteNice poem! I admire people who can write something as good as this. Seems you're inspired! :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem but it says on the photo caption- third wheel?
ReplyDeleteYes.. third wheel. Maris and liard are dating and i was kinda out of place. So yeah... third wheel
DeleteOh, a new word Apricity! Will have to look that up. I like it when poet chooses to use a rare word. "Rough edges of skin" -- very nicely put.
ReplyDeleteThis is really a great breather to read especially when you're in depression or really stressed. Holding the hand of someone you trust feels good.
ReplyDeleteShort poem but give the life of each word that expresses the overall meaning. I like the way it's sonstructed and the warmth it captured the readers. Great!
ReplyDeleteA person's touch is always powerful, especially when it's done in kindness, love or compassion. Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThat's the power of touch... Its very real and special...
ReplyDeleteI think we just need that comforting presence to make things a lot easier. By the way, I love the music at your site.
ReplyDeleteI feel you here, that sometime we also need to be cuddled and give some sweet thoughts or anything that we could feel that we are loved.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great way to describe how it feels to be touched by someone you care about. It's definitely electrifying!
ReplyDeleteHow sweet to have that kind of confidence in another human being. The writing is very good.
ReplyDeleteTrue...When someone yours holds your hand or hugs you, all becomes well.
ReplyDeleteThis was a sweet poem. Everyone needs that feeling of touch.
ReplyDeleteStrong words sweet lady, love that! Thankyou for sharing.
ReplyDeleteeverything will be ok. It's the only thing a girl need to know and hear from the guy we love and trust.
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